George, some very good work produced here and within your group, you have created an effective re-branding adverting concept and a well-produced TV advert.
In regards to unit 2: Communication Skills for Creative Media Production (pitch and presentation):
You were able to use appropriate techniques to extract comprehensive information from written sources and presented a well-structured and substantial media production report which conveys information with precise exemplification and justifies conclusions with supporting arguments.
Your pitch was interesting and I thought that you conveyed the information about your re-branding idea and employed forms of address in your pitch to communicate ideas with impact and flair. The pitch was visually good and you deployed and managed technology to pitch a media production proposal with creativity and fair and to near professional standards.
You made effective changes to your work with frequent beneficial effects.
In regards to unit 30: Advertisement Production for Television:
Working within your group, you were able originate and develop an idea for a TV advertisement showing some imagination and with only occasional assistance. The advert demonstrated a good understanding of conventions in TV adverts and it was clear that you were able to produce a TV advertisement to a good standard showing some imagination and with only occasional assistance.
Currently you are still missing the TV advert analysis and evaluation from your blog. You also need to upload the pre-production paperwork to your blog as well.
This needs to be addresses ASAP with a final deadline of 6 June.
